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Hire like you had a room full of advisors. Now you do.

One of them helped write this page. He’d very much like you to know that. — RS

“Mission-driven” is a tell you don’t know your wedge. Sutherland

Three bullets in and I’d close this tab. Martin

You haven’t said the money. The money is the role. Horowitz

Your hero says “fast-paced.” Passive candidates filter that out. Sullivan

If you wouldn’t say it out loud at lunch, don’t write it. McCord

You’re describing the job. Position the offer. Dunford

What you’re actually choosing between.

The default

ChatGPT, your last JD, ninety minutes you don’t have, and a hunch.

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A studio that interviews you, writes the role in your voice, and puts six experienced reviewers between your draft and the people you’re trying to reach.

The first one is free. So is the second.

What a passive candidate ignores

Senior Product Manager

We’re a fast-paced, mission-driven, results-oriented team looking for a dynamic, passionate self-starter and thought leader to join our growing family. The ideal candidate is a rockstar who thrives in ambiguity, wears many hats, and isn’t afraid to roll up their sleeves.

Responsibilities

  • Own the product roadmap
  • Drive cross-functional alignment
  • Liaise with key stakeholders
  • Leverage data to drive insights
  • Champion the voice of the customer
  • Define and track KPIs
  • Manage the backlog
  • Run agile ceremonies
  • Synthesise market research
  • Partner with engineering and design
  • Communicate the vision
  • Foster a culture of innovation
  • Identify growth opportunities
  • Optimise the funnel
  • Support go-to-market
  • Mentor junior team members
  • Wear many hats as needed
  • Other duties as assigned
What a passive candidate finishes

Senior Product Manager, Checkout

General Purpose

You own the checkout funnel end-to-end — the 40% of revenue that lives or dies in the last three screens. Today it converts at 61%. The job is to find the next ten points and ship them.

What you’ll have done

First 90 daysMap every drop-off in the flow and ship one fix that moves conversion by a measurable point.
By month sixOwn the experiment pipeline outright: you decide what we test, in what order, and why.
The yearCheckout conversion from 61% to 70%, with the playbook written down so it survives you.

Why this over your current seat

You’ve carried a revenue number before and can name the metric you moved. You’d rather ship a small thing that works than present a big thing that doesn’t.

Interview plan · Senior Product Manager

What the loop must prove

CompetencyTested at
Owns a revenue funnel end-to-endWork sample
Prioritises under real ambiguityCase + panel
Moves people without authorityBackchannel
Writes the thinking downTake-home memo
Stage 2 · Funnel teardown (60 min)

Live work-sample on a real checkout-conversion problem from our own data. Knockout stage — a strong no here ends the loop.

Scorecard · A 4 names the metric they’d move first and the experiment they’d run to move it. A 2 lists features with no thesis.

Stage 4 · Influence panel (45 min)

Three partners they’d have no authority over. We watch whether the room leans in or politely waits for them to finish.

Scorecard · A 4 changes one panellist’s mind on a real trade-off. A 2 wins the argument and loses the room.

This is what your Monday morning looks like.

They’ve already read your draft.

Six of the most quoted voices in hiring, strategy and persuasion. Below is the kind of note each one leaves — one sharp, specific call you can take or wave off.

John Sullivan31 May · 14:08

Your hero says “mission-driven.” The passive candidate you actually want filters that out in half a second.

Roger Martin30 May · 17:41

Three bullets in and I’d close the tab. Lead with the choice this role makes, not the chores it inherits.

Ben Horowitz29 May · 08:15

You still haven’t said the money. For this seat the money *is* the role. Say it before paragraph four.

Patty McCord28 May · 16:50

“Wear many hats” is a euphemism for “we haven’t scoped this.” If you wouldn’t say it at lunch, cut it.

April Dunford30 May · 11:03

You’re describing the job. The reader is choosing between offers. Position the offer, then describe the job.

Rory Sutherland31 May · 09:27

“Fast-paced” is what you write when you can’t describe the actual pace. Tell me what Tuesday feels like.

The best person you could hire isn’t reading your job description. They’re being shown it by a friend over coffee. Write for the friend.
— RS

What it costs you not to use this.

A wrong hire you spend a year unwinding. The great candidate who read your first line and never opened the email. The Monday you spend rewriting last quarter’s description because no one remembered what the role was actually for. That’s the bill. It’s already running.

You pay the model directly. Your data, your bill, your kill switch. We don’t get between you and Anthropic.

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